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Ok, not a problem :) I have a Dr's appointment in about an hour, so I will get on it as soon as I get back. Yea, I'm amazed as well about how far it's come. Little tweeks here and there sure do make a difference. I'm glad you both like it.
Okay Mr. Jinko, this is what my daughter and I think.
1. Remove the long black etch line on the left side of the lower trunk (below the c-pillar.)
2. Remove the right curved etch line on the "U" in the twig.
3. Those two etch lines below the beetle. Shorten them a tad and remove the tiny etch line above them.
4. The twig bookmark - There is a black spot in the ridge of the book below it that should show a smidge of white. However, maybe we just twist the bookmark since we want the leaf not to block that white open area between the book and the spine on the right. My daughter even suggest just remvoving the large leaf on the bookmark, but I think that would marginalize it.
She's amazed at how we have taken it from it beginnings into what it looks like now.
We are done then.
I agree, but this is your's...not mine. I want you to be satisfied with it. I actually think this design is going to grab a lot of attention. I'm not just saying that because I designed it either. :) Whatever you want done, I'm willing to do it.
You will laugh, but I'm saving three VERY small things to talk to my daughter about. There is a point where you need to stop and not cross over the artistic boundaries with nitpicking. So, I'm backing off to see if she feels it lends to the design's content or can be tweaked/removed. For now, we have ourselves a pretty nice piece of work here.
if there's anything else, please don't hesitate to tell me. I want this to be perfect.
Stunning!
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