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No prob :) If this is mainly for your daughter, I want to get her approval!
Overall it's colorful, but I do think it busy. The leaf at the top bugs me. So does the butterfly on the book. Not sure if the beetle or butterfly would look better on the rock. The font for name make it hard to read it. If I recall it was easier to read before. The trees are a very nice touch in the backgound. You are clearly getting the essance of things with this. Now, I just learned about 3 weeks ago that 75% of all books to read for lesiure are bought by females, so a boy will not cut it here. A girl with ponytail will. You might even be able to get away with a small yellow sun in the background. Most of what I said will hold true, but I'd hold off till I talk to my daughter this evening.
I added the young boy reading the book against the rock. I was worried that it might be too busy, but after I designed it the whole thing worked beautifully. Also, I used one font for the title, and separated the ".com" by using black. I can make any changes if you'd like. Not a problem :)
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