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Okay Mr. JinkDesigns: Here's the fine tuning as best as can be explained. 1. Remove that black curl on the left hand side of the book below the c-pillar. 2. Remove that brown twig on the right side of the trunk next to the c-pillar hole. 3. Extent the brown twig just a smidge to connect to the leaf (top one and right one) below the butterfly. 4. Remove the bit of black twig beyond the leaf right in front and above the beetle. 5. Flip the leaf around to the other side with a small black twig on the limb rising straight up behind the beetle. 6. Add a little back twig to the leaf on the far right branch. 7. Remove the green below the twig that spells the "S" and is right above the leaf at the end of it. (You'll see it if you look hard enough.) 8. Rotate the leaf in the dotted "i" 45 degree so that the stem is on the top. (This will give it the illusion it's falling onto the "i". 9. On both sides of the white book's edge: Right side - add another or two black line fo etching to abstractly define the pages. The fill out the black at the bottom above the book cover with white. Left side: Do a similar thing. 10. Make sure the gray book border show throughout the book border. (You might even consider making it the twig color to redue the colors by one on the graphic.) Okay, sorry for all this (quick changes), but with the amount of effort in this, it deserves to achieve a higher level. Burton might even be proud of us. He'd just change all the colors to make it look creepy!
I like what the worm is doing now, but this is worst hold yet. Go back to the original hole and just know off a little of the pymaird top and I think you have this part.
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