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In reviewing this I saw your comments about the leaves, which missed the first time. Someone early on used this on their logo and it actually worked. I like that you have the lettering "dancing" a bit now. It does not look so formal anymore which is consistent with the overall feel. Still now sure about the ".com" color. I just think that simple at this point works. Too much more might begin to distract from it and the wording must be obivious. (It may even be hard for some to pickup the the "Natures" in the tree limbs.) Not all people can discriminate well visually. Still, I love that. Two things that may or may not work: 1. A hollow in the trunk of the tree with some critter sticking its head out? (Don't want the trunk expanded very much if any.) 2. A leaf and/or twig bookmark draping over the open spine of the book. (Don't what the image to get bigger overall) These are just "possible ideas. I really like how it's looking thus far aside from the lowering lettering. Getting this to fit a sized logo chould be challenge. More after talking to my daughter.
The butterfly and other things are looking fantastic. What I don't like is the leaves on "Notions". Can't read it well from a short distance which is important.
I just played around with the font, and I think that if was clashing. The curves in the word "natures" and the simplicity of "notions.com" I took a font and drew some leaves on them, then live traced in illustrator. I think it came out nice, but let me know what you think. Like I said, it can me modified any way you want. :)
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