Posted By: Client
Posted On: 2017-04-19 09:50:34
Thanks very much Jonny, this looks great. I like the textures.
One big criticism on this submissions is the layout size. The book page size is 6Wx9H, but to do a double wide page like you submitted, you would need to avoid information spanning the middle portion of the graphic as that would be lost in the inside gutter of the book.
Another note, if you're going to copy paragraph text from one of the sources I listed you'd need to quote and cite the source. I will also need to track down their terms and conditions to see what kind of licenses are required to use their text.
Also, this book will have a global reach, though your US map is great, it really needs to be a global map of locations.
And final critique is the Transparency text would be good to show some level of transparency for transparent and translucent.