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Hi Madalina. I am probably going to go with your design. I like the modern, contemporary feel of it. Each page needs some clean up, so I'm going to go through each page and provide some detailed feedback. Thanks so much! Here are my comments on this page... 1. Can you move "BOWL 3.95" up onto the line between cup and quart, so they are all on the same line? 2. Can you add "SAGANAKI Opa! 6.95" under Potato Skins? 3. Can you left justify BAKED OMELETTES and the copy in blue underneath it? I like visually the way it looks when you push it to the right, but it's too hard to read. 4. Several of the icons are out of alignment. Can you go through each page to make sure they are correct? I noticed a mistake on almost every page. 5. Can ou pull the CHOPPED SALAD onto the top of the second column of salads? That should even out the column length a bit. 6. Also, I just noticed that you took off the period after each item description and added space before the price. Can you put the period back in and just leave one space between the description and the price? That's it on this page. Thank you.
Hi again Pam! I've uploaded the menu with the modifications you asked. I made it more organized and tidy than before. Hope you'll like it. I suggest you to put a small text in each page in the red square at the left corner.(where isn't one already, as in soup page). Have you thought about changing something in beverages and breakfast pages? Thanks, Madalina.
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