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MatthewW, thank you so much for this revision entry! Like your other design, it still feels like there is something missing, but I have a little more input to offer on this artwork. I still don't like the artwork in the "o"... it is a cool idea, but none of the symbols used so far are easily identifiable. Second, the slogan line just doesn't fit; it feels like the brown bar is sticking out too far to the left. I feel like it either has to be longer (going the whole length of the logo), or shorter (so it fits under "of the weak"). Thank you again for listening to my suggestions and incorporating them into your revisions. I appreciate your efforts, and look forward to your future submissions/revisions!
Hello. Thank you for your feedback last night. I have replaced the somewhat inscrutable depiction of an open mouth with a simple and classical geometric shape that suggests an open mouth. I have also adjusted the bottom bar so that it fully encompasses the tagline, giving it a greater feeling of stability. I look forward to your feedback. Best regards, Matthew
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john12343 Bio
I am an Illustrator and Designer living in Los Angeles. I work for a nonprofit org full time.
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