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Understood. Thanks so much for all of your hard work on this.
I try it more cartoonish version. it just make it worst. i think this concept gone as far as it could.
I wanted to come back to this because many people I showed this to liked it but they said it took itself too serious. They said that "it sent the right message" or "it said everything" and that is the way I felt. It just seems so serious instead of playful. Perhaps the gold is to imperial or something. Perhaps the kids need to be more cartoon like. I don't know but I wanted to encourage you to try at this one again if you had it in you...because this one seemed to be one that caught peoples eye and keeps catching mine as well. I would like to submit it to the board as a finalist if I can get it a bit more casual instead of so uptight.
I have held off on commenting on this because I wanted to show it to someone else. I like several things about it. I like the ones on the left better than the right (the stacked effect). I like that you underlined More to stress that word and I like the type of underline and font that you use in this version better than in the one that is similar to this. I like it a lot but it seems to serious, perhaps not juvenile enough. Needs to relax a bit, just a bit too uptight. My friend who is a designer (interior designer but is helping me pick one) says that she thinks there is too much going on. I still like it and am keeping it as an option. Maybe making the image on top of the words more fun would kick it over the edge for me (using same concept just re-stylized).
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