Logo Design Entry # 37582

rgfernandez

Jun 07, 2009 01:06 PM

here I am again! New idea.... how about using this design but putting the "Transformational" right above "bodywork" rather than around the top. Some of my friends advised me to delete the slogan all together because the creates too much text, just too many words to read. We're going back to the hands, the sun, but "transformational bodywork" on the bottom. Let's see what that looks like.... thanks so much for all of your hard work!!! b

rgfernandez

Jun 07, 2009 09:06 AM

ok, the font was what my friend was referring to. She said she liked the design but that the font used was not very interesting, in light of the fact that there are so many different kinds to choose from. I'm not that familiar, just thought I'm pass the info. See if you can try some different fonts and let's see what the looks like. Also, another friend of mine thought that the pertroglyph sun is a bit too hard, she thought the something different in the hands could be explored. Both good ideas, just wanted to share with you what my friends thought of your design. thanks so much for all of your patience and help!! becky

griffindesign

Jun 07, 2009 04:06 AM

Hi Becky, Not quite sure what you're looking to see. Are you talking about a particular font? Or all the fonts? I just need a little bit more direction on what you would like changed and what you do and don't like. That would be tremendously helpful. Thanks, Faith

rgfernandez

Jun 06, 2009 12:06 PM

A friend of mine who is an artist of sorts.. she made comment that the text could be greatly improved. I love this one and was wondering if you could show me some different text. Thank you!! becky

rgfernandez

Jun 06, 2009 06:06 AM

Awesome, now let's work on the slogan. I've been thinking about this and have decided that it should read, "stretch your muscles. Relax your mind. Balance your body" I'm now contemplating using "your" or "the", what do you think? I really like this!!!