Brochure Design Entry # 3279122

Zavi

Jan 07, 2024 05:01 PM

Thanks for your feedback again.  Please check the updated version that i have just uploaded, if you need any changes. For the logo, I will update the place.

fmwania

Jan 07, 2024 05:01 PM

I need a bi-fold brochure. Please download the instructions again so you can see the 4 different pages.

Our logo should only appear on the cover page next to the GSA logo

fmwania

Jan 07, 2024 04:01 PM

Thanks for the tip. I was able to see more details.

I believe it is better to have the footer details only on the cover page. Have the address, phone number, and email address in a single column. On the address, add "Suite 210" to the same line as 27555 Ynez Rd so that it reads "27555 Ynez Rd, Ste 210". This will save you some little space

AccuPay's logo could be part of the footer alongside the one for GSA

Zavi

Jan 07, 2024 04:01 PM

Thanks for your feedback. I will update he design accordingly. Also, you can open the image in to new tab you will see the details in the design.

Thank you.

fmwania

Jan 07, 2024 03:01 PM

Also, please use a navy blue font color for the headers on the cover page.

Reduce the size of AccuPay's logo. It is way too big

Next, I would like to be able to see the actual entry and zoom it. I am currently seeing it from a far

fmwania

Jan 07, 2024 03:01 PM

This is a good entry. You hit all the main points to begin with. We now need to clean it up and improve on a few things.

1. No need to have our logo on every page. Having it on the cover page is enough. Please eliminate it from the other pages.

2. The second header on the first inner page should read "Payroll Processing"

3. I see you used the big graphic on the back page as is. It needs to be changed a little. It needs "Compensation Management" added between Lean & Grow and Giving & Volunteering in the white section of the graphic. The text in the core needs to read AccuPay powered by iSolved.

4. On the cover page, bring the "Elections Workers Payroll Services" and "Third Party Admin ......." closer to each other to the middle of the page

Zavi

Jan 07, 2024 02:01 PM

Hi, Please check the design and add your valuable comments.

Thank you.