Short Story/Essay Project Contest

Biography for Realtor, that is personal and emotion evoking

by n_funston

Contest received 9 entries and the contest holder has awarded a winner.

congratulations to contest winner: 09340934j4o3j4i

Name of Contest

Biography for Realtor, that is personal and emotion evoking

Describe your company and organization and target audience

I am a realtor who has been in the business for 9 years. Before that I did retail for my whole life. Most recently GM for the pet industry. My slogan is making your realty dreams a reality.

What do you need written

I need a personal biography that is emotion evoking. I am trying to replicate a Hobbs Herder story that they do for agents. So let me tell you about myself. I am a mother of twin one year old girls Callie & Violet. They are the love of my life. I had a lot problems during the pregnancy, including bed rest, gestational diabetes, asthma issues, and preterm labor (4 times). My husband is an architect and loves houses just like i do. We met on Match.com when i was 28 in 2008 and have been together since the second date. We married in 2010 and were pregnant with twins 1 month later! We bought a VA foreclosure home and renovated it ourselves.Which took us over a year to find. I bought my first home at 26 years old by myself and renovated this as well. I would consider myself a foodie. I love to watch cooking shows and replicate that for my family. I am spontaneous and like to travel and do different things whenever we get a chance. I have been to 25 out of the 50 states already. My best trip being Hawaii. I value my family happiness, integrity, loyalty, quality, and service. My marketing farm is going to target families with pets. I have four dogs, Izzy, Brody, Hanis, and Gracie who are all seniors and a betta named Old Blue. I want the story to show how I transition into real estate. I went to Purdue University and received my bachelor's degree in Business Management, worked retail and Began as a Inventory Manager at Gateway Computers 2000-2004, then was a Administrative manager at Lowe's 2005-2006 where I learned I had a passion for home improvement and renovation, and then moved onto a General Manager at PETCO 2006-2013 where my love of animals was able to shine through. We bought our house and renovated it and I decided it was time to do Real Estate full time instead of part time as I had been doing since 2004. I have lived in Northwest Indiana my entire life, and love everything it has to offer, I grew up in DeMotte, and have lived in Griffith area for 7 years now.

What is important

Most imp part is so that my clients view me as a source they can trust. I want them to feel like they know me before they meet me & get a sense of who I am, & show how I evolved into Real estate & why I am the expert Want expert def used in verbiage

What do you not want

I do not want "cheesy"

Briefly describe your contest

Realtor Biography that is emotion evokin