Logo Design Entry # 22823

john12343

Feb 24, 2009 06:02 PM

You will see the fixed one shortly - just having a little trouble with my firewall.

john12343

Feb 24, 2009 06:02 PM

OK, done. It is a pleasure working with someone who has such an eye for detail and a clear vision of what you want.

author

Feb 24, 2009 02:02 PM

Just a reminder that you have a day left in this contest to put our suggested polish into your graphic. It will get bumped to a 5 with if we the adjustments in these comments. Thanks

author

Feb 24, 2009 03:02 AM

And antoher thing: Since we are getting serious about making this look great here's yet another thing: 6. See those two trees in the back: Middle two. Note how they are jammed together in the middle and it too black around both there borders. Can we separate them just a little for whitesapce so this ink blotting does not occur?

author

Feb 24, 2009 03:02 AM

Also, if I was really being picky: 5. I'd turn the rabbits head just a bit so the floppy ears are not laying on the back of the bear. Then again, I don't wat the ears sticking out beyond the left edge of the trees, so maybe they ears themselves need tweaking??? Your call on this to get it looking right.

author

Feb 24, 2009 03:02 AM

Okay, I think we are getting close to done with this. 1. One the pencil make the penil color the color of the goosse beak and the turtles toes (remember we are reusing colors here.). Make the metal strip the color of the whie. 2. Move the goose beak off the bears arm into that open spot. (Look like he's being lazy or biting him.). 3. Thin up the thickeness of the black border surrounding the front part of the paper. Leave a little to maintain the perception of "depth." 4. The "M" looks better but it you look at is carefully, it looks thicker than the other smalle letter and as thick as the "N"'s and it should not.