Logo Design Entry # 109493

Makaveli Designs

Feb 15, 2010 03:02 PM

Dude sorry I have been struggling thinking of a new concept ! I know that I can do something to improve this it's just for some reason I really like the way this looks. It's seems when I try to change it, it feels I make it too cluttered. So I am still thinking of a new concept or another way but I have to say sorry for not being able to make your mouth so wet over my logo that you ended the contest on the spot :)

Makaveli Designs

Feb 09, 2010 01:02 PM

Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback it really seems you understand what it is we as designers go through and for that I appreciate it. I will keep an eye on this contest and in the mean time work on a slightly different approach based on your comments. I am big fan of the type of comedians you listed and I think I have the style to win this contest :) Stay tuned! Thanks, Mike

g.vandeusen

Feb 09, 2010 01:02 PM

Mike- I don't want to exercise you and then not pick you in the end, but I guess artists are used to that. Oy. You seem to have a good feel for what I'm looking for, but I think the head needs to be looking at the audience. That way I could put one of the jokes underneath and it would look like HeadSpam is telling them the joke. Maybe the head is cocked. Maybe not. HeadSpam is screwball, and the part about how thoughts change as they pass though his goofy brain you really seem to have captured. It's a bit stoner, admittedly. I'm OK if you want to wait it out a little and see what happens.

Makaveli Designs

Feb 08, 2010 04:02 PM

Let me know if this is better for ya :) Cheers, Mike