Logo Design Entry # 590770

matchstickmedia

Sep 12, 2012 01:09 PM

Unfortunately, in such a small format, the detail is kind of lost, but the red edges are only choppy because I made a shadow underneath the blue portions to give them a 3D effect. I can easily create a version where choice would simply be below retirement ond only big enough to equal the length of it.

alanna12

Sep 12, 2012 02:09 AM

I like the font colors and the fact that they distinguish between the two words. I'm not quite sure whether I like choice jumping out more than retirement...that might be a good thing though. I also feel like choice is a bit too stretched out. Like the logo..the edges appear to be a little choppy on the red portion, is that by design?

alanna12

Sep 11, 2012 11:09 PM

on the right track