Logo Design Entry # 568337

sambel09

Jul 24, 2012 06:07 PM

OK sir, i'll fix it again...

C.J. Robinson

Jul 24, 2012 03:07 PM

Hi Sambel, We saw your newer versions but we are afraid that you took away what we liked about your design. We like this one because: 1.) very clean, simple ship lines; 2.) water lines are clean and with the boat on top show movement. We just wanted you to change the boat bow to be more like submission #282 but more simple (like your original line are is very simple). Also, we believe that we need the ODA to be inside the shield so that the artwork can stand alone as a logo; if we don't put ODA inside then we will always have to have the words out to the right.With the "ODA" inside the shield, you can make the full name bigger and stack each word on a different line: Ocean Defenders Alliance If you want to make any word a different color or thinner it would be "Alliance." Both of the other words need to be displayed of equal importance. The tagline can still go under that. Thank you so much!!!

sambel09

Jul 19, 2012 04:07 PM

thank's sir. i glad can help you. ok, i'll fix it..

C.J. Robinson

Jul 19, 2012 12:07 PM

Hello Sambel09 - very nice work! We really like it but we are having a problem envisioning it because the drawing of the boat is so much different than the type of working/dive boats we use. It looks more like a yacht. Can you look at our website and check out our boat? We would like simple version of it (without the railing and all the towers). http://www.oceandefenders.org/ , then go to About Us, then scroll down and click on "Meet the Clearwater (our main boat)." We know the website is bad! We are redesigning it now. The logo is one of the last things we are trying to nail down before launching the new site. Thank you for your efforts. Can you also try another version with "ODA" in the shield and the full name of the organization stacked out to the right? Thank you!