Graphic Design Entry # 732898

by mentho0ol

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jorge.valdex

Jul 10, 2013 05:07 AM

Hi: I like your design because it is simple and minimalist. I kind of have some ideas about some of them and perhaps you can help me to reflect it. 1. Essentia, can we use a DNA Chain instead of the signs? 2. Delphos: Could we use something that reflect knowledge? for instance... An owl, or a parthenon or a brain (This framework helps organizations to make explicit and manage the corporate knowledge) 3. Mobilis is for organizational transformation. With the drawing you are prposing I don't feel it. Perhaps we can use a butterfly geting out of the cocoon or something like that it would be better. 4. Flow, I kind of like it, but I would like to see a kind of air waves illustrating a free but smooth flow. Also would you mind using gradient collors to give a little more live to each circle and perhaps using black lines to surround the internal drawings. I really like your work and there's only other designer doing things right so you have a good chance to be the winner. Please help me with the changes...